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2005-03-29 08:41 am (UTC)
Re: Who could give me a critique? You? or you? or you?
Y'know, I don't think I saw anyone else use questions instead of noun phrases as topic heads, but it actually seems to work better in some ways.
If I remember the song correctly, though, you could expand the "what do you actually do" even further:
- go
- stand on your own
- leave on your own
- go home
- cry
- want to die
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Re: Who could give me a critique? You? or you? or you?
If I remember the song correctly, though, you could expand the "what do you actually do" even further:
- go
- stand on your own
- leave on your own
- go home
- cry
- want to die