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vvvexation ([personal profile] vvvexation) wrote2006-01-17 03:47 pm
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Poet and didn't know it

The following thought drifted through my head during lunch today, and it wasn't until a moment later that I realized I'd composed an inadvertent haiku:

The chicken is good--
I should have grabbed more of that
and less of the rice.

(I didn't say it was a particularly interesting thought.)

[identity profile] canis-fortuna.livejournal.com 2006-01-18 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
Is this because you are a poet or a math nerd? Do you count how many of your sentences have a prime number of words and/or syllables?

[identity profile] hadar-aviram.livejournal.com 2006-01-18 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Love the haiku. It really captures the moment well, which is what haiku is supposed to do, right?

Since much of my daily thinking (probably most of it) is woven around food, I might as well take your lead and make something creative out of it.

This salad bar rocks -
Why don't they put more tofu
and less cabbage, though?

[identity profile] caesia.livejournal.com 2006-01-19 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
now all of my thoughts
are stuck in five seven five.
s'bloody addictive.